It is really nice I love it. critic wise though I would just say ot make her neck slightly wider and the use of colors to make her outfit pop out against the background is excellent. I think that is all I have to say about that because it is most beautiful
I really like the colours in this one: the hair and clothes really match! I reckeon the dress is good because it is simple. Love the short hair!! Nice background too though I'm not sure why the red fabric is there...? Otherwise, this is a really fantastic artwork!