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January 10, 2011
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color palette by ryky color palette by ryky
All colors for you:)

Paint tool SAI ... 3hours

:hug: Thank you for everything :hug:
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Critique by BICKpen Jan 11, 2011, 10:03:05 AM
Great use of color! You did well in arranging all the hues to make the piece pop without getting muddy. I also enjoy the variation between broad, smooth strokes and the tiny little squiggly ones. I feel that a little attention needs to be given to the edges around her neck, especially the little white squiggly on the left. Because of the sharpness of it, her neck and the squiggle start competing to be in front and the piece flattens out. The same sort of thing happens where her hair meets the ruffles just below that, and to a lesser degree, where her bangs cover her eyes. The eye is so crisply rendered it starts to feel like it's in front of the bangs.
Compositionally, my only critique is the upper-right hand corner; the space between the curve of her head and the edge of the piece is very tense. If that were broken by a curve or something in the background I think it would unify the piece a little better.
All that said, I love the subtle colorations in the face. The skin definitely seems translucent and reflective of the colors around it. The butterflies are also a charming touch!
Overall, great work, keep it up!
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Yellowauthor Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
R - RAINBOWS !!!!!!!! <333333333 I must give you a virtual hug, m'dear \(-_-)/ <33 This is absolutely GORGEOUS!!!!!
merearthling Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011
simply amazing fresh as spring !!!
MaLeXitaVnzl Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011
oh holy guacamole! this great! i'm officially a stocker of your drawings....
LizzHintiru Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011
OMG! <3
HViciPrice Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Another awesome work! I love the little squiggles added over the smoother work (on the bow and sleeve and whatnot).
OhPizzaPizzaYum Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011
very pretty~
Fernvii Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011
Love the colors you used.
PurpleSmurf8 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011
Amazing! I really like the design and butterfly touches on her sleeve and hair piece. It's all awesome :D
Selye Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Student Digital Artist
cute + great colors + i love the way you colour hair!!:D
just wonderful!
ryky Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Professional General Artist
thank you
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