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October 1, 2012
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Mood: Joy ~Nicksta100 Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool drawing
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~ricochet188 Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have some advice for you... and I notice it very prominently in this drawing particularity, It seems to me you are getting too much into the rendering and not putting enough time into making sure that the placement of all the facial features is correct. This happens to a lot of artists when they draw this sort of pose for a character, at an angle. There is a discrepancy between the way you have drawn the head and the angle at which the facial features are drawn. The nose is drawn as if it is from a front view and same with the mouth and to a lesser extent, the eyes, but then they are warped to fit onto a face that is on an angle. It's clear to me that you put so much effort in rendering this drawing that you are overlooking the fundamental problems.

A good way to reveal to yourself all the mistakes you make is to simply flip the image in photoshop. From there you can make some minor tweaks with the transformation tools and then flip it back and re draw some bits. Granted I'm sure you put a lot of work into this picture and re drawing it is out of the question but it's just something to keep in mind in the future.
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~ricochet188 Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Btw I should mention: flipping the image gives you a fresh look on the picture. If all your anatomy is right, the face should look accurate no matter which way you view it.
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~uea-ikibishi Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
I wonder if your a Pisces ...:iconfrangoodjobplz:
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*DivianaAjatar Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it looks great i especially love the eyes!! but it hink the mouth is a little wring placed ...
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:iconla-structure-du-ciel:
Very beautiful! The eyes are really awesome. Wonderful work!
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~galadriel-the-small Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow!
This is really good!
The shading is fantastic and so are the eyes!
Keep up the good work! :D
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~MisterPirelli Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nice done...
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~FindThatLove Oct 6, 2012  Student Photographer
MY art teacher doesn't like me using mechanical pencil :p
This is so good!
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Mood: Love *CuteYuna92 Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How Pretty) *-*
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